In this essay, I have decided to describe my journay to Poland via school. A life-changing experience. Seven amazing and unforgetable days, that have changed my whole point of view.
We have landed in Warsaw in(ww. - on) February the 28th, full of excitement. at(ww. - In) the beginning, the group was not united. The first two days, we stayed in the city of Krakow, yet we have(gr. - had) not seen hard views. (On) the third day we visited the concentration and extermination camp Auschwitz and Auschwitz-Birkenau. it was unbelivable to see this construction. I could not believe that this actual earth that I was standing on, once used to be a death factory.
(On) The fourth day, we visited the city of Tarnow, (and) we met polish youth. Surprisingly, I discovered that they are(gr.-use the past) not very different from us, and they turned out to be very simpatic(ww.) and polite. (On) the next day, which was the hardest one for me, we went to(the) Majdanek extermination camp, this hell left me speechless. You really cannot understand when the cruelty ends and if it ever does.
It may be quite hard to descibe in words how significant this journay is, but having done(ww. - taken part in) this journay, I feel that I have learnt much about the history of our nation, but I have also learnt to appreciate the importance of life and all the little things that I have. I can undoubtably say that each and every Jew should take part in the journay to Poland.
Very good.
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Daphna
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