peer pressure

I remember the age when all my class was divided into two groups: the popular, and the the unpopular. Everybody wanted to be popular, no matter what it took. That is to say, that if the popular guys wanted someone to do something bad for them, he would, In order to fit in, to make them satisfied. But that is just a little piece of this huge problem called peer pressure.

In my life, this period of time is over, but many children and teenagers still deal with it a lot of times(מיותר), and the worst is that they consider it everything!(phr.) I mean(מיותר) this is all they think about, when they go to school, when they go out; they always have to look cool. I'm not saying it’s bad (to) want to look good, but when it comes to smoking, using drugs, stealing, drinking alcohol and many other things like that – it is bad! And most of the time it is caused by peer pressure.

I think that if every kid acts just like his friends in order to feel special, there would be no uniqueness. In the end, they will all look the same,and do the same things. I also think that the real feeling of success comes when you listen to yourself only! No doubts, no dilemmas, doing the right thing for you and not for anybody else.

But in the end, every one grows up and understands his\her mistakes and probably has some regrets about a few, but there is one thing I am sure about, no one will ever regret being himself

Well done (90). This is much better

Daphna